- P.1 'TGR is leasing the railway...'. Should this be 'leasing the railcar'? Also, 'mid-October' with hyphen.
- P.4 '... that this facility,...' spelling.
- P.5, para1 'mid-September' with hyphen
- P.6 '...children's...' add apostrophe. Also, ... 'spud in a container' competition... add quotes.
- P.19 The Community Energy Advice item seems not to be the sub-edited version. '...typical home's...' add apostrophe; '...more effective.' add full stop after 'effective'; 'Heat is sneaky stuff;' add semi-colon after 'stuff'; 'Block off unused fireplaces...' spelling; 'fill a plastic bag' delete 's' of 'bags'; 'If you can,' add comma after 'can' and delete comma after 'insulation'; 'If you can, surround...' spelling; '...in the walls. If your house...' start new sentence after 'walls'.
30 September 2012
BN Proof, October
A few things I noticed:
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