30 September 2012

BN Proof, October

A few things I noticed:
  1. P.1  'TGR is leasing the railway...'.  Should this be 'leasing the railcar'?  Also, 'mid-October' with hyphen.
  2. P.4  '... that this facility,...' spelling.
  3. P.5, para1  'mid-September' with hyphen
  4. P.6  '...children's...' add apostrophe.  Also, ... 'spud in a container' competition... add quotes.
  5. P.19  The Community Energy Advice item seems not to be the sub-edited version.  '...typical home's...' add apostrophe;   '...more effective.' add full stop after 'effective';   'Heat is sneaky stuff;' add semi-colon after 'stuff';   'Block off unused fireplaces...' spelling;   'fill a plastic bag' delete 's' of 'bags';   'If you can,' add comma after 'can' and delete comma after 'insulation';   'If you can, surround...' spelling;   '...in the walls. If your house...' start new sentence after 'walls'.
All the best.  Laurence

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