Blueskin resident opens drive-through coffee shop

---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Daniel Duxfield <danielduxfield@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2010 20:58:31 +1200
Subject: Blueskin resident opens new drive through coffee shop.
To: editors@blueskin.co.nz

Blueskin Media wrote:
> Hmmm, Daniel, I like what you are doing and I am happy to publish it,
> but the "he said" style of press release always looks a bit fake. Why
> don't you rewrite it in the first person and be the one saying all
> that stuff? It will seem more open and friendly and be more suited to
> our style.
>
> Peter Dowden
> president/co-editor
> Blueskin Media
>
> On 09/06/2010, Daniel Duxfield <danielduxfield@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have written this article about my new shop.
>> I am happy if you want to edit it.
>> Let me know if you want to meet me and take a photo or two, or I could
>> send you some photos.
>>
>> Yours,
>> Daniel Duxfield
>>
>>
>>
>
>
Hi Peter,

I've re-written the press release.
Hope it better suits your publication.

Cheers
Daniel.

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